Only once one has known real sadness can one feel true happiness.
Ability of understanding greatness of a work of art can be interpreted differently.It can be interpreted as understanding the story behind the art by the masses or having deep understanding of the skills required to complete the art or even why the art was created in the first place.
If more people are able to relate to the story behind an work of art then it is self-evident to be more popular and great.For example - Most popular songs like "Someone Like You" from Adele has millions of views because the song summarizes to relationship ending which most people can relate it with their own life and tend to listen to it more when they feel sad.
On the other side , there are cases when people dont fully understand the skill involved in building an art but still it has a significant meaning among the masses.For example- Most people dont know the mechanical engineering involved in creation of a bugatti veron which is the most expensive as well as fastest car, but is still considered a great piece of art in car department.
It really boils down to what people are trying to understand in an art . If it is its story then more the people understand the more great it is.Otherwise some art form are still popular regardless lack of understanding of by the masses the skills required to to make it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, still, then, well, for example, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 232.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7025862069 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84850313713 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 215.323595506 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521551724138 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 704.065955056 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.981032932 60.3974514979 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 218.2 118.986275619 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.4 23.4991977007 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.0 5.21951772744 345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0362381159914 0.243740707755 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0184479176941 0.0831039109588 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230442995244 0.0758088955206 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0230598971176 0.150359130593 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236103347011 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 14.1392134831 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 48.8420337079 68% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.87 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 100.480337079 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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