only once one has known real sadness can one feel true happiness
In general, all the views about feelings such as sadness and happiness are relative. In other words, one has to know what is one feeling to get to know another. For instance, without knowing the sadness one can not know the difference between sadness and happiness. I can not completely agree for this statement that experienceing sadness before feeling the happiness but can agree to the fact that these two are realtive and both has to be experienced to get to know what they are really. In the following paragraphs, I will describe my stance with theory and palusible examples for better understanding.
Let us assume that, some individual is craving for something for a long time. Even after a hundered of attemps, he is not able to achieve it. He will be completely lost in sadness or despire. Suddenly, on someday he has achieved it. He will be so happy to get it as he is craving for it for long. And also, that happiness will get augmented by the victory after so many failures. Here, the happiness is because of the sadness created by failures by the attempts.
If a white paper written a reseacher after working hard on it for almost month gets rejected in a conference, the author will be lost in sadness. After resubmitting it, if it goes through the review process, since he knows the pain of rejection, he can actually enjoy the acceptance. Another example, If you are hungry and gets a food after suffering with hunger for a while then, you will appreciate it. On the other hand, if one is experiencing only success he can never appreciate it. If one the failure comes then he will really know the significance of the success.
Life will not be enjoyable if there is only happiness or only sadnees. Life should be composed of both or in other words, there has to be both ups and downs. Ups are referred as happy moments, downs are referred as sad moments. One has to experience both of them to really experience both of them to appreciate them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ference between sadness and happiness. I can not completely agree for this statem...
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Line 9, column 329, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...her example, If you are hungry and gets a food after suffering with hunger for a while...
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Line 9, column 489, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nly success he can never appreciate it. If one the failure comes then he will real...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, so, then, while, as to, for instance, in general, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 351.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62678062678 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64615470503 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48433048433 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0310069193 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95238095238 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235781242596 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800169027758 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784906346329 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149415150842 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842587277131 0.0667264976115 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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