In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring ? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
For each individual, one's family plays an important role. Basically, a child is a reflection of his/her own family. In recent years, the family structure has changed tremendously. In my opinion, the trend shifted from a joint family to a nuclear family which has affected the family values and has impacted the children the most.
Few decades ago, we could see the concept of joint family having grand parents and parents with children living together. The family values and ethics were taught to the children from their home itself. This helped children to learn their traditional values and know more about their culture. It rightly said that parents are always the first teacher and the basic learning starts from the home itself. Living in a closed knit family helps a child to learn, how to give respect to the elders and also helps to develop a bond with the other family members.
It teaches a child to adjust and grow themselves in a cooperative environment.
On the other side, in recent years, the concept of a nuclear family having mother,father and children is very popular and commonly seen. Children who are born and brought up in a nuclear family lacks in cooperating with other people. They find difficulty in bonding up with the outsiders. They tend to become self-centered and do not like to share their belongings. It is often seen that they are not so expressive with other family members, which eventually leads to less bond and affection towards elder members.
In the current generation where everybody is busy following dreams and ambitious for their careers, often tend to forget about giving their children, a lesson of the family values and ethics. Nuclear family members should always try to give and spend some quality time with their children that helps and individual to have a meaningful and valuable life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
For each individual, ones family plays an important role. Basical...
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Line 11, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , father
...oncept of a nuclear family having mother,father and children is very popular and common...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98709677419 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51125458362 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522580645161 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5245789556 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9411764706 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191268472509 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07676409111 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106736229154 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107852534898 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945124960645 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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