As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
This is the nature of humans to find the short cuts in any kind of situations. Nowadays everyday new innovations occurred. The technology made our day to day life more easier and simpler than as before. The innovation of the wheel changed the way of transportation. In the early era people travelled by walk and by riding animals like horse, camel and elephant to travel from one place to another. After the innovation of wheel new technologies invented such as cars, bikes and other vehicles, through which transportation became more simpler than before. Technology has proved the quote "Time Is Money" and become worship for the mankind. The above statement shows the negative effect of technology on the ability of humans. I strongly disagree with the given statement.
Practical reason is that, we as mankind are the main key elements behind the invention of the technology. When a person faces a problem in real life, he thinks regarding the solution of the problem and that thinking leads to the invention of the technology. And thinking ability of humans increases rather than decreasing. "Right Brothers" inventors of aero plane first of all thought that if "Birds can fly in the sky then why don't we?". The solution of this problem leads them to invent aero plane. Their aim was to fly into the sky like birds which lead the revolution in the aero planes and nowadays one can easily travel from one part of the world to the other. The aim of "Mark Zuckerberg" was to connect students of the Harvard University, which blinked a question in his mind that "Is it possible to connect the whole world?". Solution of that problem leads to him to the invention of "Facebook".
In the absence of technology, it was tough to do medical surgeries, to make cure of unknown diseases. But now with the help of emerging technologies such as Artificial Intelligence and Machine Learning one can predict on the bases of certain tests that person has specific disease or not. And using this technology nowadays it becomes easy find the cure of any diseases. It also becomes easy to replace the heart, through which life is possible. Using the robots everything becomes easy and simple because they can do any work more efficient and precise way than humans. In the early age people used to communicate using post, which usually took time to send the message to the appropriate person. In the modern era everyone has their personal mobile phones and with the invention of internet it becomes easy to talk with anyone at any time.
In modern age everything become cashless, with the help of only one click your money will be transfer from one account to another and whatever you want to buy will be delivered to your address. When there was not the concept of cash people used to buy things with barter system. With the advancement of technologies, it become easy to be aware of any kind of events which is going in anywhere using television. In modern days it becomes easy to construct the model of any building using virtual reality in 3-dimensional. Computer is the most useful invention of humankind, because there is not any place left where computer is not used.
With the help of technology our physical stress and mental stress also become lower. But for good health it is important to have good physical fitness and mental fitness also. Nowadays more of us rely on calculator to do even small calculations also. Due to which we are facing difficulties in problem solving techniques. Because if do calculations in our mind then it alerts every time which also increases mental strength. In contemporary days most of the people use vehicles to travel even for a short distance rather than walking, which creates physical diseases. Everyone uses mobile phones after waking up in the morning rather than doing daily exercises, yoga. Most of the kids spend more time on Facebook, WhatsApp, YouTube which also creates vile effects on their behavior and on their thinking ability.
We can use the technology to such an extent that technology doesn't bind us to fully rely on it. We can't be the slave of technology. Because technology is the wonderful creation of us which may destroy us if we do not use it in proper manner. Technology is one kind of drug if we use it economically then it works as cure else it may become poison also.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...The technology made our day to day life more easier and simpler than as before. The innovat...
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Line 1, column 531, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'simpler' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: simpler
...es, through which transportation became more simpler than before. Technology has proved the ...
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Line 2, column 443, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...'Birds can fly in the sky then why dont we?'. The solution of this problem...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... easy to talk with anyone at any time. In modern age everything become cashless, ...
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Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... buy will be delivered to your address. When there was not the concept of cash peopl...
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Line 4, column 320, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...ith the advancement of technologies, it become easy to be aware of any kind of events ...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ood physical fitness and mental fitness also. Nowadays more of us rely on calculator...
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Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...alculator to do even small calculations also. Due to which we are facing difficultie...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...iculties in problem solving techniques. Because if do calculations in our mind then it ...
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Line 6, column 61, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ology to such an extent that technology doesnt bind us to fully rely on it. We cant be...
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Line 6, column 99, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... doesnt bind us to fully rely on it. We cant be the slave of technology. Because tec...
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Line 6, column 347, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...works as cure else it may become poison also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, so, then, as to, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 122.0 58.6224719101 208% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3645.0 2235.4752809 163% => OK
No of words: 749.0 442.535393258 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86648865154 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.23143043219 4.55969084622 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75653183165 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 338.0 215.323595506 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45126835781 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1175.4 704.065955056 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.38483146067 319% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 41.0 20.2370786517 203% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.008563864 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9024390244 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2682926829 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07317073171 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148823579457 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358785619592 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416701285002 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791922250128 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457762511437 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 100.480337079 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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