As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
technology is invented by human brains, so the ability of deterioration of human brain is vague. humans design technologies, strategies for making life easier. The complex tasks that are difficult for human to perform alone are now done by machines. In the 21st century every person is surrounded by many electronic devices like computers, automobiles, Mobile phones, smart watch etc. these technologies help them make life easier and save time I order to perform more tasks.
human thinking has advanced so much that in case of medical assistance u can get advice from the doctor through the application depending on the symptoms shared in the application.
these technologies do have drawbacks that they are creating in the environment. like the automobiles are creating a state of crisis in the country for fuel, but for such problems also there are human working on technologies to operate those automobiles on incombustible resources like solar energy.
technology is a boon to the industry and human brains are the power hubs for such innovations in technolog.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Technology
technology is invented by human brains, so the abi...
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Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Humans
... deterioration of human brain is vague. humans design technologies, strategies for mak...
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Line 1, column 454, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'performing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: performing
... make life easier and save time I order to perform more tasks. human thinking has advanc...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Human
...e time I order to perform more tasks. human thinking has advanced so much that in c...
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Suggestion: These
...e symptoms shared in the application. these technologies do have drawbacks that the...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Like
...t they are creating in the environment. like the automobiles are creating a state of...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Technology
...bustible resources like solar energy. technology is a boon to the industry and human bra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 2235.4752809 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 442.535393258 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22093023256 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.55969084622 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95710271431 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656976744186 0.4932671777 133% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 704.065955056 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2833713676 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7777777778 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 5.21951772744 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234136650975 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926506004492 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511231952065 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128712940731 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494126331304 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 100.480337079 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.