As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Nowadays, technology has become an integral part of our life. We are relentlessly working on developing new technologies to find solutions to our problem. Which had a good as well as bad effect on our lives, but in my opinion technology is doing more good to people and to humanity than creating problems.
Technology is evolving at a rapid pace, solving complex problems for which a normal human mind may take too much time to solve technology can do it in less time and very effectively. Reducing this overhead of doing many mundane tasks by ourselves we can delegate these tasks to machines, computers etc. and can spend that productive time on thinking and solving other issues which need attention.
To elaborate more on this one, consider the industry domains like energy, transportation, communication, healthcare, education etc. Humans are now using the internet as a primary source of communication. Consider the pre-internet era where we used to send postcards to communicate, which takes a long time to communicate some important information which now can be communicated within milliseconds. Thus, having effective communication using technology actually improved our problem-solving capacity and not deteriorating it.
On the same lines, we are making constant breakthroughs in the field of transportation by finding new creative ways to lessen our transport time. Aeroplanes, Trains, Ships are actually pushing the limits of physics to cut travel time. Education domain is using now remote schools, online courses, which is actually improving the knowledge among humankind. However, technology has its own drawbacks also but those can be solved by developing more advanced technologies.
To close, technology actually helps people do more productive work, which is more useful to humankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 408, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...chnology has its own drawbacks also but those can be solved by developing more advanced t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, second, so, thus, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 281.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46619217082 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16673993095 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633451957295 0.4932671777 128% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3289905662 60.3974514979 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209552588983 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725536691917 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740584365391 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13502246403 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606911971678 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.