People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
The statement claims that before taking any risky decisions one should think about its result thoroughly, at first this claim seems to be correct at some point. But according to a saying “Every action has its equal and opposite reaction” it would be worthless if at the time of taking any risky decision a person has to think for its consequences.
Consider a person in a DO or DIE situation and the only way to survive the situation is to complete a risky task or take some kind of risky decision at that time if he/she thinks about the consequences of the action then it is totally worthless in fact the decision of thinking about the consequences would end up with some bad news.
Taking risk is an essential part of life, the more risky actions you perform the more you gain experience about life. People usually hesitate in taking risky decisions just because they are afraid about the consequences but the fact is, the more you take risk the more stronger you become. Taking Risky decisions is the only way to overcome ones fear. For an example; if you are afraid of heights and you have this one time chance of skydiving which puts you in a tough position, if you think about the consequences like what if something happens you in the mid-air or what if the parachute didn’t work then this fear would take away your opportunity of performing this activity. But instead of thinking about the consequences if you face your fear then there is a chance that at the end you may experience a never forgetting feeling of the joy, adventure and the most important thing that you will be free from the fear of heights.
The only way to success is to have guts to take risky, important decisions without having fear about what the consequences. This would a person in achieving a great success, happiness, knowledge. It can help to improve one’s perspective towards the goal of life, it could help to generate unimaginable amount of confidence. As a result of the analysis we can say that performing risky actions without thinking about the consequences leads to minimum risk.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...the fact is, the more you take risk the more stronger you become. Taking Risky decisions is t...
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Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...y decisions is the only way to overcome ones fear. For an example; if you are afraid...
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Line 7, column 330, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rate unimaginable amount of confidence. As a result of the analysis we can say tha...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'as to', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216417910448 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.164179104478 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0845771144279 0.0880659088768 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0248756218905 0.0497285424764 50% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0572139303483 0.0444667217837 129% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.134328358209 0.12292977631 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0398009950249 0.0406280797675 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68718729236 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0298507462687 0.030933414821 97% => OK
Particles: 0.00497512437811 0.0016655270985 299% => OK
Determiners: 0.13184079602 0.0997080785238 132% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0248756218905 0.0249443105267 100% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0124378109453 0.0148568991511 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2101.0 2732.02544248 77% => OK
No of words: 366.0 452.878318584 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74043715847 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.295081967213 0.366273622748 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22131147541 0.280924506359 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.200843997647 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120218579235 0.132149295362 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68718729236 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 219.290929204 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456284153005 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.2938739162 55.4138127331 85% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 30.5 23.380412469 130% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.4517768598 59.4972553346 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.083333333 141.124799967 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 23.380412469 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.674092028746 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 52.631147541 51.4728631049 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.58585858586 1.64882698954 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112629579177 0.391690518653 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.18795397382 0.123202303941 153% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.123511623107 0.077325440228 160% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.63846866376 0.547984918172 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.197454998463 0.149214159877 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608025101944 0.161403998019 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04281163985 0.0892212321368 48% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.373496736814 0.385218514788 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0623712534305 0.0692045440612 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898014593862 0.275328986314 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268443405701 0.0653680567796 41% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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