People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Risk,a task when we know we want the thing so badly that we stop thinking for consequences.Here, author putforth a good statement that we should undertake risky action only we have carefully considered its consequences, indisputably is good claim when it comes at risk of life.Nevertheless, when it came to famous businessman Steve Job and his risk to leave the colleage and follow his dreams refutes the claim made by author.Thus, I would generally disagree with claim that before undertaking risk we should consider its consequences.
First of all, risk in fact stands for task performed without knowing its consequences.I would like to point out that, if we think about consequences for an action and if we did not like the assumptions of consequences we might stop trying for actions.To illustrate this, lets take example of famous Indian writer Chetan Bhagat who gave up his fine job in banking only to fulfill his dreams of writing novels.In this circumstance if he had thought that writing will not fill his stomach or he will not be recognised and by considering these consequence he had stopped working on novel, would have made him regret and we would have never got to read fine novels like 'three mistake of my life'.
Furthermore,if we start think about consequence of each and every action we make then it will surely degrade development of our society.Specifically, while learning new things like driving car or swimming or any other neccessary deed if we start thinking about accidents or even the fact that we will be forced to drive the car 24x7 after learning it will terminate our own development.Both common sense and personal experience have told us that this world will require us to do any job at any time need and we have to be prepared to accomplish it rather to give reason.Hence, all evidence above demonstrate that whether it is learning swimming or car or any other thing will be successful if and only if we stop thinking about consequences.
Admittedly, it is true that the consequences we considered are not hundred percent sure to happen.In addition, we cannot predict exact consequences of any action as it could turn opposite.For instance when elections are near and a country had bad experience with current president will always want a new president who will solve their problem and in fact build an ideal society.Here what is the use of predicting consequence that other candidate will emerge as a 'sunshine' president as no one knows the process with he/she works.
In conclusion, although an actions does not have fix consequence as it depends on individual works on deed ,it is useless to think about consequences and think about how to succefully carry out the task. As long as measurement performed or some other areas are involved with will forfiet the claim made by author, this claims will be weak with various factor and examples.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 33.0505617978 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2393.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 486.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92386831276 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01874573105 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520576131687 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 746.1 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 81.0 23.0359550562 352% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 220.647846629 60.3974514979 365% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 398.833333333 118.986275619 335% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 81.0 23.4991977007 345% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.8333333333 5.21951772744 457% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169973463983 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862331530192 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790310476076 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986254932612 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774324629908 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.2 14.1392134831 298% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.28 48.8420337079 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 12.1743820225 277% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.44 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.9 8.38706741573 130% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.4 11.2143820225 307% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 34.0 11.7820224719 289% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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