People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Taking risks is what gives one new and the desired results. Every action has it's consequence. risky actions have to be undertaken by considering all the possible outcomes and their respective consequences. if one doesn't consider the consequences many ethical and moral issues come in the picture.
Take for example the invention of an fighter jets. The inventor took the risk of flying his/her first prototype considering the risks involved. Had they not considered them, fatal injury could have happened. they calculated the trajectory, multiple possible outcomes, what will happen if any equipment fails and other failures. External consequences also have to be considered. like the how the noise will affect the people around it, how hot the exhaust gases will be.
nuclear invention is one of the greatest innovation from the dawn of time. Small, powerfull, energetic atoms are used to produce energy. This energy can be produced in a slow controlled method like nuclear power plants or in an uncontrolled manner like a nuclear bomb. these actions came with many significant consequences, some of which are lost lives of millions of people. The scientists has to consider the consequences and the positive outcomes. Hence strict regulations were made on handling and working on nuclear equipments to reduce the use of them in dangerous activities. Had the scientists not comsidered the worst possible outcomes, out entire world would have been like Hiroshima and Nagasaki where 2 nuclear bombs were dropped decades ago, but it's side effects are still present in the genes of current generations. nuclear radiations alter the genes of the affected people and these damaged genes are passed on to the next generations.
All in all, consequences have to be considered in any action, be it risky or not. considering consequences helps the innovator avoid negative possible outcomes, directly or indirectly saving lives property and people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, still, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 309.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3074433657 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83568653561 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608414239482 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5239222827 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.45 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159081090121 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517205071259 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409497387031 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104762223401 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224715156948 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.