People who are the most deeply committed to an idea or policy are also the most critical of it.
When striving to realize a goal, it is extraordinarily necessary to devote one’s time and concentration constantly to the process of succeeding. If one is eager to achieve an idea or make an effective policy, it is of great importance to be deeply committed to the idea or the policy. Hence, people who insist on the ideas and focus on the ideas are critical of the achievements.
While some people may contend that it is the teamwork of all people who determine the change of success and in a team not all people have to be deeply buried in the process, I maintain that the most crucial ones are always the most committed ones. For instance, Ma Yun, CEO of Alipay, created the idea of paying without cash. Some may consider that Ma Yun is only the innovator of this idea instead of the ones who have to spend quantities of time making this idea come true. However, I believe they are totally wrong. As the manager, Ma Yun needs to carefully and thoroughly pay attention to how the computer engineers realize this goal and how the advertisements should be applied to the public. Indeed, he is the most nervous person in the company in that his idea exerts great influence on the profits the company can earn.
Also, some hold the view that it is the ideas themselves and the policy makers that are supposed to gain praise. But I want to ask those people whether the ideas can be developed and improved without exacting work from ordinary workers. It may be acceptable to deem the executives and managers who create the ideas as critical. But when it comes to who are the most critical, there is no denying that the people who employ themselves to achieving the idea should be considered the most significant. Besides, usually a successful and respectful manager helps the workers overcome the difficulties they encounter when applying new measurements.
In addition, when committed to the idea or policy, the efficiency will dramatically increase and give rise to more success. And this wonderful achievements can spring from those who devote time and energy to this idea and policy. Accordingly, they are the most critical. For instance, policy makers often care about the whole company, even the whole company, ignoring the details. Usually details can decide the efficiency and feasibility. When people spend lots of time on this policy, utilizing the details to fulfill this policy, then the policy can be made both successful and satisfactory. Then it is safe to say that thanks to those people who are deeply involved in making the policy, our society can be better and better.
In a nutshell, while some think that it is the policy maker or the innovator of the ideas who are the most critical, I commit to the notion that those who are deeply committed to the ideas and policy, immense in the procedure of realizing these goals are the most crucial ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'considers'.
Suggestion: considers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, hence, however, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.3162921348 221% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2384.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 498.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78714859438 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64162102554 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441767068273 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 776.7 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.99239913 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.363636364 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402668997539 0.243740707755 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113944012636 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108796846654 0.0758088955206 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259754118399 0.150359130593 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715224152781 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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