"People work more productively in teams than individually. Teamwork requires cooperation, which motivates people much more than individual competition does."
Competition is nothing but is a process of self-improvement and in day to day life we face many competitions like at beginning of life from kinder garden to school to universities to job. If an individual has to show their talent and skills he has compete to their peers in that particular area. The given prompt is that when a person is given a task in a team one can work more productively than individually. But one has to prove his competence and skills in that particular work one has to work individually.
When a person works individually one has to overcome the challenges on his own which makes one a confident and self-dependent so that one cannot rely on other. For example, in a company when person has to do a certain work which requires skills and a challenging one if an individual can do it this will boost up his confidence than to working in a team.
When an individual has to perform a task in a team there should be cooperation, determination and hard work is required from each of the team member. Sometimes, for example If a task is given to a team to make a presentation in a team and each one of them assigned a task in order but if any one of them cannot complete his task on time or the task is not performed as per need than whole team has to suffer the punishment. This will show that one can do the same task more easily than in a team.
But sometimes there is a situation when an individual can perform better than an individually. For example, a person is weak in maths and the is given to them is related to maths, if one can work in a team one can get support from his teammates to overcome this difficulty or even perform better than his individual performance. There is one famous idiom is that One plus one is not equal to two it is equal to eleven.
Finally, I thought that when a person has to show his skills and want to become self-dependent one should have work individually but at the same time one has to understand how other people thought on the same task one has to work in a team.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'competed'.
Suggestion: competed
... to show their talent and skills he has compete to their peers in that particular area....
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.296875 5.05705443957 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78473953998 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.380208333333 0.4932671777 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.1267158065 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.923076923 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5384615385 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20901134167 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984892270764 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622714774607 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132323854624 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308556213155 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 12.1743820225 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 12.1639044944 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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