People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
This issue raises the controversial topic whether a larger part of people's behaviour is determined by external forces, such as their immediate environment. Some argue that as humans, we tend to behave from our own volition that humans are responsible for their actions. Nevertheless, others would argue that a larger part of human behaviour is determined by external forces like things our immediate environment dictates. After careful consideration, it is clear that people's behaviour are largely determined by external forces such as laws, whether, and even from those we call our role model.
First, external forces dictates the way we behave. This is because as humans we tend to behave towards what the environment dictates. For example consider a class room setting, where students are in class learning how to read and write, usually in the classroom the school have rules and regulations that control the behaviour of the students in class and the teacher will always make sure these rules are obeyed to the letter. As long as the teacher is in class, students will always behave according to the rules governing the classroom. But once the teacher is no longer around to enforce the law, the class is usually rowdy and noisy, because almost all the rules will be broken. However people behave is totally determined internally, because, even when the teacher is not around not all the student will break the rules.
As humans the things we do and also skills that we acquire is also largely determined by our environment. For example in Nigeria - the most populous African country with close to 200 million people. Nigeria as a country is diverse in culture and tradition, one common thing character noticeable to most Nigerian is that, they don't know how to swim except the people who live in the riverine areas like the Ijaw people. These people are very good swimmers because their environment is surrounded by water bodies such as rivers, make and so on, for this reason, it becomes almost impossible to carry out daily activities without having to pass over a river or lake because most of their houses are surrounded by water. That's why almost all the people in this area are good swimmers because their environment and external force dictates that.
Now looking as how geography, weather and climatic condition dictates the kind of house people built. For example the kind of house and materials used in construction of house in the temperate and tropical region is totally different even though Go the places have similar construction material. For example, in Nigeria a house is constructed with cement brick as the dominant material while in the United state one of the major materials for construction of building are wood because of it thermal conductivity - a property of how a material control the movement of heat and control temperature. Also there are fire place in houses in the US to regulate temperature during winter but in Nigeria houses don have fire place because there is no winter in that part of the word, therefore there is no need for that.
To sum up, humans behaviour is largely determined from external forces as because we tend to behave seemly in a controlled environment and unseemly when not under a looking-glass. Also construct building based on our environmental climatic conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2782.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 555.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01261261261 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67530633836 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455855855856 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 891.9 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7327175453 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.476190476 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168616867857 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056109646824 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565916781094 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104433593477 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735800069197 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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