People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
it is being stated that people’">people’s behaviour is mainly determined by forces not of their own making. however, in my opinion, this argument is an over-generalization of the situation.
Admittedly, in the past, the forces that coming from the whole community tend to shape people’">people’s behaviour. back to decades before, black people were once being treated inhumanly. they were being deprived of the basic rights for a human being and were utilized as slaves. At that point of time, this extreme discrimination on black people forces the whole society to treat them in a dehumanized way. Even though there might be people who think the black people are innocent and wish to offer help, the prevailing thought that “they don not deserve proper treatment” that roaming in the society forces those people to also being rude and apathetic towards black people. Moreover, religious organization was playing a huge role during the past and monarchy was dominating the whole society. people was being credulous to believe whatever the King or Queen had suggested, and the whole community was manipulated by the thought that the dictators were specially appointed by God to tell what is the right thing to do. thus, their behaviour is greatly affected by those outside forces.
however, nowadays, things have changed; people have developed more independent thinking and it is reasonable to say that people are having a full control over their behaviours. For example, homosexual relationship was consider extremely inappropriate during the past. Therefore, back to the past, people who adorn people who have the same sex with them were forced to hide their emotions whereas now a lot of places have legalized the marriage between same sex. thus, there is no pressures or anything that restrain people from doing things they want to do.
In sum, in the modern society, freedom is an very important factor that helps to maintain a peaceful and irenic living environment. When people’">people’s behaviours are under controlled by negative forces which are not of their own making, it is fair to say that society will corrupt and erode.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 347.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43515850144 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.69032522662 2.79657885939 132% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564841498559 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6188988093 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.875 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133348031225 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459796088157 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043410394795 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987091962266 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019704047189 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.