People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
All people face difficult situations to move forward in life.It is the decisions we take at these time that shows our character and determines our fate.
A strong hearted and mindful person gets prepared for these roadblocks of life and are always ready to take the right decision inspite of powerful external forces,
wehereas on the other hand,the light minded person succumb to these situation and are not able to steer the life to the direction which they want.
There could be various situations of hardships like a student's burden of finance for highers studies,an activist's fight against injustice and others.
But if people have a belief and they see the bigger picture they will know that they will overcome these problems by dedicating themselves to the hardship of studying and fighting for the right
cause. However there could be some more difficult situations like poor kids wanting to study in schools, in which case they can only try to move in the correct direction by starting reading books and
waiting for the right opportunity to arrive.
We can look into history,people have become great by rising to the occasion,though toil of hard work and iron will.
The example of Mahatma Gandhi,who latter was called as the father of the nation of India, through his iron grit,never bowed down to the rulers.
And through his constant struggle of decades,was able to get freedom for India.
Martin Luther King,is also and example who rise above the worse of situations when apartheid was prevalent.
He stood against that and also let Black people believe they should be treated equally.
By his years of hardships,he was able to help the Black people breaking the shackles.
In the end,You can become a slave of the external forces or can show valor and rise above them.
To quote famous poet Ron Keats
"Too roads diverge into wood,and I have taken the one, and that had made all the difference".
Its up to us to decide our fate and difficulties are just opportunities for us to rise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
...cult situations to move forward in life.It is the decisions we take at these time ...
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...rnal forces, wehereas on the other hand,the light minded person succumb to these si...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'these situations'?
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...hand,the light minded person succumb to these situation and are not able to steer the life to t...
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...ts burden of finance for highers studies,an activists fight against injustice and o...
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Suggestion: However,
...ying and fighting for the right cause. However there could be some more difficult situ...
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... direction by starting reading books and waiting for the right opportunity to arr...
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...y to arrive. We can look into history,people have become great by rising to the occa...
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...e become great by rising to the occasion,though toil of hard work and iron will. The e...
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...ron will. The example of Mahatma Gandhi,who latter was called as the father of the ...
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...on will. The example of Mahatma Gandhi,who latter was called as the father of the nation ...
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...e nation of India, through his iron grit,never bowed down to the rulers. And through ...
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...through his constant struggle of decades,was able to get freedom for India. Martin ...
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...t freedom for India. Martin Luther King,is also and example who rise above the wor...
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...ated equally. By his years of hardships,he was able to help the Black people break...
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...ple breaking the shackles. In the end,You can become a slave of the external forc...
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...t Ron Keats Too roads diverge into wood,and I have taken the one, and that had made...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... and that had made all the difference. Its up to us to decide our fate and difficu...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244094488189 0.240241500013 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.165354330709 0.157235817809 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0629921259843 0.0880659088768 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0341207349081 0.0497285424764 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0603674540682 0.0444667217837 136% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.11811023622 0.12292977631 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0393700787402 0.0406280797675 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.52726381187 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0446194225722 0.030933414821 144% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0944881889764 0.0997080785238 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0262467191601 0.0249443105267 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0157480314961 0.0148568991511 106% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2004.0 2732.02544248 73% => OK
No of words: 341.0 452.878318584 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87683284457 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328445747801 0.366273622748 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.24633431085 0.280924506359 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152492668622 0.200843997647 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0938416422287 0.132149295362 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52726381187 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 219.290929204 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592375366569 0.48968727796 121% => OK
Word variations: 67.8281203434 55.4138127331 122% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 24.3571428571 23.380412469 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1245666678 59.4972553346 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.142857143 141.124799967 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 23.380412469 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.94800884956 344% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 17.0 5.21349557522 326% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.9905739422 51.4728631049 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.54545454545 1.64882698954 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388085422776 0.391690518653 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109372514377 0.123202303941 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0582572369916 0.077325440228 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.94924526513 0.547984918172 173% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.203823515206 0.149214159877 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156290376985 0.161403998019 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717729250561 0.0892212321368 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.102944469031 0.385218514788 27% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0671750754338 0.0692045440612 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146711622361 0.275328986314 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675667483674 0.0653680567796 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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