The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
Music is by far the best thing in the entertainment industry. There are hardly any people who don't listen to music. Being dead for several generation cannot be a proper or an efficient way to measure a talent of a musician. A musician talent can be measured by the responses people give to his/her songs. I disagree with the statement that for an honest assesment the musician need to stop or no longer produce music in other words being metaphorically dead. I support my position by the following two examples.
Firstly, Fame of any musician cannot help him to achieve glory, its his music which will help him to achieve success. For example - A singer in india named Anu Malik was a great singer and composer of his time, he had given chances to many individuals to excel in their carrers. His son did not have that much great voice in singing, but because he is Anu malik's son he got many opportunitites in the music industry but he could'nt excel enough as the people did'nt like his music. So here we get to know that though the musician has some fame in the industry it will not interfere with the honest assessments, whether he is active or dead .
Secondly, For assessing a talent of an musician he need not be dead(not active). The responses he/she gets from audience is enough for him/her for honest assesment. For example, Arjit singh , he is best singer of the current generation. Whenever his songs come they all are fantastic. This judgement of fantastic is not because he is now a great singer but because his songs connect to people's heart and people like such songs. This real talent does not need any assessment as here fame does not interfere, only the sher talent is assessed here and for that he need not need to be dead.
In contrasts, Some singers who have talents, people fails to reconginze that talent at first, they recongnise that talent much later when the musician has stop producing songs. One such musician named Honey Sighn in india had a great talent in music but responses to his songs where not that great. Which made him weak and less confident. Soon after when he stopped producing songs, people then reliase how great musician he was. Then he made a comeback after 5 years and now he is achieving great success.
In conclusion, For assessing the real talent of any musician, the musician need not need to be dead(not active). As fame and glory does not interfere with the honest assessment. As music is a art which either you like it or don't , there is noting in between which can change these things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 453.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61368653422 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44930207927 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465783664459 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 650.7 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6495419598 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0833333333 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355866326891 0.243740707755 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108966498256 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10783356967 0.0758088955206 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223097475621 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816771018193 0.0667264976115 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.