The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment

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The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a musician' or simply 'musicians'?
Suggestion: a musician; musicians
How do you measure a musicians real talent? The argument mentions asse...
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'musicians'' or 'musician's'?
Suggestion: musicians'; musician's
...irstly, the author mentions here that a musicians death can only be her/his way to gettin...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'someones'' or 'someone's'?
Suggestion: someones'; someone's
...o assess music after a grave event like someones death? All the fame that the author men...
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Line 3, column 551, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...veryone who like it. A musicians motive isnt to just keep collecting audience for no...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ience no matter the size. If a musician isnt dead but isnt famous either doesnt mean...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...r the size. If a musician isnt dead but isnt famous either doesnt mean his music is ...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...sician isnt dead but isnt famous either doesnt mean his music is any less good compare...
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Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
... good compared to others. He just maybe hasnt been discovered by a people yet. Or has...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...snt been discovered by a people yet. Or hasnt gotten a chance to send her/his music o...
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Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: he's
... small amount of people like his music, hes already successful. His motive is in pr...
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Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun audience seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of audiences'.
Suggestion: a lot of audiences
... someone else could do it better gather a lot of audience, doesnt mean his worth is diminished. ...
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Line 5, column 506, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... do it better gather a lot of audience, doesnt mean his worth is diminished. Lastl...
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Line 7, column 348, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...great musician for developing fully and thats robbing the society of an idol. A music...
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Line 7, column 386, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A musician' or simply 'musicians'?
Suggestion: A musician; Musicians
...d thats robbing the society of an idol. A musicians gets encouragement when they get an aud...
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Line 7, column 398, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'get'.
Suggestion: get
...ing the society of an idol. A musicians gets encouragement when they get an audience...
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Line 9, column 430, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ario happens one in a million. Audience isnt that much of a fool to neglect real mus...
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Line 9, column 496, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: We've
...o neglect real musicians for fake ones. Weve got to give more credit to the assessme...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...the music authority. In conclusion, Id just like to mention that while the aut...
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Line 11, column 112, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ument might not be completely wrong, it doesnt make his argument any less ridiculous. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, may, really, regarding, so, well, while, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 33.0505617978 209% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2868.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 608.0 442.535393258 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71710526316 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9656475924 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59367229884 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444078947368 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 900.0 704.065955056 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.2370786517 188% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9991390182 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4736842105 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76315789474 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345899974037 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940853243664 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958370015668 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188800704768 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105672226714 0.0667264976115 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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