Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
scandal means doing something illegal. it may be related to people or related to some organization or with a group of people.we usually see many scandals in news paper or in television in our every day life. whenever there is a news about a scandal all the media will focus on it. because whenever there is a scandal done it
shows
what are the faults present in the system.
it
shows
us a way to rectify the faults which are in our system.For example,consider india. The biggest scam that people of india have listened is the 2G spectrum scam.it has shown us many faults that are that are done regularly by the politicians.Not only politicians does the scam, but also some business persons. whenever a scandal comes out it creates a wave which will spread like a wild-fire across the nation irrespective of state.
considering international scams, us president does wrong behaviour with the staff, by taking drugs some persons participated in olympics and so on. These scams are done by the people's money. The most effected person in the whole scam is the common man.
sometimes he will invest some money on some company and after two days government closes the company because they have not given some correct papers. At that time the common man who invested his money has lost,not the government,not the company officials.
sometimes the scandals go in publicly.whenever there is a scandal all the attention will go on the details of the scandal and the problem through which scandal has arised. it is true that scandals will
shows
us the problems in the system.but after the scandal the person who is most effected is the common man.whenever there is a scandal it takes us to the place where every one has thought that there is no fixation for that.
In conclusion, I will agree to the statement that scandals are useful and they helps us to focus on the problems where no speaker has never mentioned.but for some extent only.I belive that if there are less scandals in a system that system is better to follow. scandals are useful for focusing of a particular problem but it affects so many lives of the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 370.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76486486486 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70579417786 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489189189189 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8967218925 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.1875 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179074535213 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061686955433 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532036393184 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799568605214 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06387194174 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.