Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
The author has contended two opposing beliefs of the people about choosing the field of study. Some of them suggest that college students should select their career field based on the consideration of their talents and interests. On the contrary, others believe that students should choose their field according to the demand and availability of jobs. Both of the sides have their own reasoning which will be discussed below.
People usually say that one should follow his/her passion but do not consider the struggles and underlying hardships one had to go through while following that ardent if the choice of industry is not in demand. The art industry requires great finesse, skills, and pure passion towards conveying messages or emotions through a single piece of art. One needs to be fully devoted to the process in order to make a masterpiece. But can anyone make a living out of it? Well, the answer depends on various circumstances. There are many artists who successfully made money in this industry and are also well known due to their artistic expertise. But the majority of the people in this industry are struggling despite having decent knowledge and skills. Therefore, one should also consider other factors such as financial stability and demand while choosing the field of study.
I believe that college students should be first exposed to the knowledge and various streams of study before they make any decision. If the student comes from poor financial status he/she is less likely to follow their passion even if he/she wants due to obligations. Also, some interests do not provide the basis for a great career. These interests could be followed alongside the main career so the individual does not become insolvent.
In conclusion, while choosing the field of study the student must consider all the possibilities that could occur in future. The privileged students have an option to opt for their interests, while the one struggling to remain solvent have priority to become stable and thus, choose the career that is in demand and could provide a decent job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 360, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...demand and availability of jobs. Both of the sides have their own reasoning which...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... all the possibilities that could occur in future. The privileged students have an option...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 345.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06376811594 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54906072211 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542028985507 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7349111595 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0555555556 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403285100825 0.243740707755 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11439186162 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130650468183 0.0758088955206 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250676026506 0.150359130593 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153885842752 0.0667264976115 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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