Some people believe that competition drives young athletes to perform at their best, while others believe that competition discourages those who are not athletically talented from participating in organized sports.
I do agree with the both part of the statement as both are true and significant at their own places. Firstly, considering the first part, we know that the athletes work hard to perform at their best in the competitions. For example, the national or international championships drive athletes to perform at their best to win in the competition.
As we know, like without exams students don’t learn their chapters same as without competitions athletes don’t practice their games with zeal and become lethargic. Since, they have nothing to fight for. But if there are competitions they work hard and try to perform at their best to win medals. Similarly, children who play games on streets such as cricket, badminton and others don’t perform at their best at that time but if those children have competition in school for the same games they try to perform at their best to win over their competitors.
Competition also drives young athletes to perform at their best because if they win it they earn a handsome amount of money. And some of the athletes are really in need of it. As well as competition is not just a competition with others. It can also be the competition with oneself which drives athlete to perform at their best to break and outdo their own records.
While considering the other part of the statement that competition discourages those who are not athletically talented. It can also be true in some cases when a person is not confident of himself. As he finds that being a part of the competition and not able to win it will not be good for his image. It can bring such a person in a self-grudging mood. Where he feels that he has no talent and he is not good in anything like others who take part in the competitions and win over it. Competition also discourages people because if they are unable to win it they have to face their parents and peers who will question them and it can also be the cause of scolding to them.
However, it is a matter of psychological condition of one’s mind that what state he is in. if the person is confident and believes in hard work then for him competition is not a problem and he will have the urge to perform at their best to win it while a person in low life condition or in stress or in depression really got discouraged by the competition due to fear of losing it.
Besides, the competition is good for the people those who have a mind state which works well during the time of pressure and bad for those who can’t handle this pressure of public and competition. Moreover, the best part of the competition is that through it we discover what we are capable of and how much more we can actually do than we ever believed possible.
So, we can conclude with the lines given by Dr. T.P. Chia that “A competitive person is always a winner. And an noncompetitive person is always a loser.” Hence, competition is a part of life. And everybody has to face it to remain in this fast and challenging world. Otherwise, he will be lost in darkness of loneliness as his peers winning over the competitions of life leave him behind and he will be left alone as everywhere from school to job, from young age to old age we face many competitions in life. Hence, one who triumphs over these competitions is the winner of the life and the other one who left behind is the loser.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ey earn a handsome amount of money. And some of the athletes are really in need of it. As w...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o break and outdo their own records. While considering the other part of the state...
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Line 13, column 115, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...petitive person is always a winner. And an noncompetitive person is always a loser...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, really, similarly, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, such as, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 33.0505617978 227% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 91.0 58.6224719101 155% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2773.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 606.0 442.535393258 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57590759076 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96155895361 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71992300162 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.387788778878 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 865.8 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6073034584 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.653846154 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416149870206 0.243740707755 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125150390603 0.0831039109588 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930693372186 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218358604097 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736165655907 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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