How to succeed in creative fields is always a popular topic in the society. Some people believe that talents for such imaginary works are innate that cannot be learned. But I think hard work and efforts are much more important before making master pieces.
Creative fields, like paiting, fiction writing and filmmaking could be dependent on personal talents. Since works in such fields always include ideas that don't exist in the real world, the talent of imagination becomes the key point during the creativity. For example, when comic painters create characters of different super heroes, they need a talent of making connection between the real life and fiction story, otherwise readers won't believe in the story. But imagination is not a rare resource. Almost everyone once has imagination about fiction story. Talents are not the only element that limits people to create works.
From my point of view, success only comes from hard work. Without years of efforts and perseverance, creaters can't find their way to show such imagination properly and audience may feel wierd about the works. Many famous artists practiced their painting skills for decades before their works were acknowledged. Without years of training, those artists wouldn't have a chance to show their talent through works because there is no audience at all. So, I believe the only way to great success is accumulating small steps through hard work and perseverance.
The key point to the success in creative fields is how to transfer thoughts into reality through different media. And I think efforts on creating and learning are essential to success. No matter what types of media they use, creaters need to focus on the basic skills in their fields and try to find the best way to show such imagination to the audience. Even if they are not talented in imagination or creativity at the beginning, they would learn that from peers and masters after years of efforts.
How to succeed in creative fields requires talents, efforts, learning and enthusiasum. But through all these elements, the only way to make master pieces is hard work and perseverance. In a conclusion, compared to the talents that are innate, efforts of training and learning are more important to the creative fields.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n such fields always include ideas that dont exist in the real world, the talent of ...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s of efforts and perseverance, creaters cant find their way to show such imagination...
^^^^
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ithout years of training, those artists wouldnt have a chance to show their talent thro...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 373.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09383378016 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53343971981 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506702412869 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6619267897 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4761904762 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7619047619 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09523809524 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339191889281 0.243740707755 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951039044802 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779937152929 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188485796062 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538509738382 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n such fields always include ideas that dont exist in the real world, the talent of ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s of efforts and perseverance, creaters cant find their way to show such imagination...
^^^^
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ithout years of training, those artists wouldnt have a chance to show their talent thro...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 373.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09383378016 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53343971981 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506702412869 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6619267897 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4761904762 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7619047619 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09523809524 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339191889281 0.243740707755 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951039044802 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779937152929 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188485796062 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538509738382 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.