The statement claims that the facilities of modern life prevent people from becoming truely strong and independent. I strongly agree with this statement. The modern life prevent people from becoming idependent and strong because of the modern invention that makes people lazy, unsocial, and make depedent on every task.
The statement claims that the facilities of modern life prevent people from becoming truely strong and independent. I strongly agree with this statement. The modern life prevent people from becoming idependent and strong because of the modern invention that makes people lazy, unsocial, and make depedent on every task.
Firstly, the invention of the modern machines makes people lazy. Everybody want to pass easy life. For example, Nowdays college students in kathmandu- capital city of Nepal, most of the students have their own vehicle. If any political strick do occur in country, few students only join the class. The reason behind this is because of the reluctance. Nobody want to walk for college. Everybody have their own vehile. Similarly in the case of sports, the number of the people at stadium decreasing in the case of cricket game in Nepal.Every math is live telecasted by media, which prevents people to go over stadium and wath cricket.
Secondly, The contemporary life pervents people to become truely independent. People are now becomming unsocial. They show reluctant to go to functions and metting. Everything could be handled with computers. Because of this, in any social organization, the numbers of attentdants are decreasing day by day. Because of the luxirious life the social nature of the human is decreasing.
Finally, the modern invention such as calulator makes us dependent on most of the calulation task. The logical reasoning power of the people are decreasing. For small amount of calulation, people are dependent on calulator. Sometimes on field, when there is unavailability of the calculator, then the whole caluation have to be shift. Everyone is searching for quick and easy solution. The beauty of the math is vanishing due to overuse of calculator in every petty issues.
Some people might say, because of the luxiries and contemporary life people are felling independent, thinking that the modern equipements help them in every task. But in deep analysis that modern invention has make our lives chaos. Invention of automic nuclear power and other disasterous instruments have makes the social life more danger. Therefore, in long run, the luxiries of the contemporary life prevent people from becomming truely independent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... join the class. The reason behind this is because of the reluctance. Nobody want to walk...
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...ss. The reason behind this is because of the reluctance. Nobody want to walk for ...
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...s is because of the reluctance. Nobody want to walk for college. Everybody have the...
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...llege. Everybody have their own vehile. Similarly in the case of sports, the number of th...
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...o go over stadium and wath cricket. Secondly, The contemporary life pervents...
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... attentdants are decreasing day by day. Because of the luxirious life the social nature...
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... nature of the human is decreasing. Finally, the modern invention such as ca...
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...s us dependent on most of the calulation task. The logical reasoning power of the...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'for example', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.27027027027 0.240241500013 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.140049140049 0.157235817809 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.120393120393 0.0880659088768 137% => OK
Adverbs: 0.034398034398 0.0497285424764 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.017199017199 0.0444667217837 39% => OK
Prepositions: 0.144963144963 0.12292977631 118% => OK
Participles: 0.041769041769 0.0406280797675 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78071919287 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.019656019656 0.030933414821 64% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.100737100737 0.0997080785238 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.004914004914 0.0249443105267 20% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00982800982801 0.0148568991511 66% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2294.0 2732.02544248 84% => OK
No of words: 361.0 452.878318584 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.35457063712 6.0361032391 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.418282548476 0.366273622748 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296398891967 0.280924506359 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.227146814404 0.200843997647 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.163434903047 0.132149295362 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78071919287 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 219.290929204 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520775623269 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 56.0458133423 55.4138127331 101% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6194690265 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.3703703704 23.380412469 57% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7081068131 59.4972553346 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.962962963 141.124799967 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3703703704 23.380412469 57% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.481481481481 0.674092028746 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.21349557522 211% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.010259567 51.4728631049 84% => OK
Elegance: 2.38461538462 1.64882698954 145% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.631988755797 0.391690518653 161% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.08389569706 0.123202303941 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0989311674293 0.077325440228 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.462005938313 0.547984918172 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.207437199529 0.149214159877 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211425922918 0.161403998019 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.193131828454 0.0892212321368 216% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.394759545773 0.385218514788 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0529702482321 0.0692045440612 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.466180701045 0.275328986314 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.220457963538 0.0653680567796 337% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88274336283 225% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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