The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
How any nation is classify as "Great"? The best path for classifying nation's is by analyze nation poverty line, education's among people, nation heritage, technologically advancements, people's behaviour etc. This all are essential part for determining great nation. The author cited that great nation is represented by the general welfare of its people not by its ruler, artists, scientists etc. Researches, nation's arts are also crucial factor of "Great Nation", also, general welfare of its people is important and integral indicator. Therefore, I concede with statement to some extent.
In recent years, technology used by any nation and its people are drastically increased, still scientist researches new technologies that will useful to human kind. Many nation's are in reasearches are very advanced. For example, United States Of America people's uses technology day to day life. They are strongly attched with this. In addition to that, China is also technologically advances. Consequently, That does not meant this nations are great nation's but technological advancement is also indicator of "Great Nation".
Artist and rulers achievements are also crucial indicator of great nation. Without any support from their country they cannot reach their goal. They reach their goal by support by their home country. Rulers are greatest factor for their nation's development. They define policies and rules. Without true rulers country will not develop.
Although, how people live in nation, poverty line also need to focus for determining any great nation. For instance, if any country are very technologically advances but their people not aware or using it.
In conclusion, Great Nation's are those which is technological advances, artist and rulers achievement and general welfare of people's. These are the indicators of "Great Nation".
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'classified'.
Suggestion: classified
How any nation is classify as 'Great'? The best path for...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nces. Consequently, That does not meant this nations are great nations but technolog...
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Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the greatest'.
Suggestion: are the greatest
...y support by their home country. Rulers are greatest factor for their nations development. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 281.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72241992883 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08858255627 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540925266904 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.837213489 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0909090909 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7727272727 23.4991977007 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306801736069 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977572323581 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110144522426 0.0758088955206 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188101919813 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991766809361 0.0667264976115 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.01 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.