The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
The prosperity and development of a country is better reflected by the living standards of its majority of general public rather than the limited number of elites. A nation, comprising public with good education and economically solvent, is considered better. I completely agree with the statement that general well- being of people is the most important indicator of a country’s achievement.
In my country Nepal, people witnessed the civil war for some 10 years to bring justice to the unpreviliged lower class citizens, to find against the discrimination amongst caste, gender, poor-rich. Earlier, the rebellion leader drew all the citizens to their side to revolt against the ruling government, however, upon acceding to the power themselves, they forgot their vow and act solely for the well-being of them and their relatives. Of course, the life standard of these disingenuous leaders and their families have improved, but the predicament is still mounting over the heads of general people.
Similarly, we can take Pakistan as an another example. Most of the leaders of the country are rich enough to afford every needs of their families as they are extremely indulged in defalcation of government funds. If Pakistan growth is measured with respect to the qualification and living standards of these few corrupted politicians, it would be regarded as one of the developed countries, however, looking at the life of general people, the country is limping with poverty so entrenched in society, that it is quite manifest.
Without a doubt, it is to be noted that the economic condition of politicians and leaders need to be better if a country wants corruption-free society. If a person is suffering from privation, it is for sure that he will indulge himself in the bribery with a motive to gain money so that he would uplift his standards of living. So, in addition to the leader, all the citizens of country should have access to all the necessities for the betterment of their lives. Likewise, there are bunches of people in every society who could make a very good life on their own like artists, scientists. If a country’s achievement is accessed based on them, that will give fallacious information. Clearly, there are people can’t afford even fundamental needful to their families.
In summary, of course, better economic status and good living standards of rulers, artists, or scientists is required, but most importantly the well-being of all the nationals is of paramount importance to measure the development of country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...the living standards of its majority of general public rather than the limited number of elite...
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Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'an example' or 'another example'.
Suggestion: an example; another example
...e. Similarly, we can take Pakistan as an another example. Most of the leaders of the country are...
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Line 7, column 734, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
...rly, there are people can't afford even fundamental needful to their families. ...
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Line 7, column 778, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... fundamental needful to their families. In summary, of course, better economic s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, look, similarly, so, still, well, in addition, in summary, of course, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2150.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20581113801 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98508625255 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544794188862 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9076482121 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.375 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8125 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 5.21951772744 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0999615545539 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326333536662 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358958442179 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609597655454 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377901630679 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.