The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The great nation is the one which is disseminated worldwide, developed in every aspect such as infrastructure, the economy of the country, the right of the citizen, literacy or education of the citizen, there all factor the harbinger with which one can evaluated as great nation. I refute the above assertion that the surest indicator of a great nation is represent not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientist but by the general welfare of its people because first nation the eminent personalities in every aspect such as politics, art and science, and then only there can be copious impact in the country reform in every aspect and which can blatantly result in the welfare of the citizen.
First and foremost, as we read history we find the public figure who had done a deliberate effort to call forth the achievement. Likewise, they are the one who makes prodigious impact in the country, making reforms and help in the development of the country. Furthermore, we focus on the personalities of the past and their achievement, because their achievement and success help one to inspire or motivate. Moreover, we imagine that if one those historical figure was not there we hadn’t have the great revolutionary change in our country. For instance, Mahatma Gandhi who was the one for bringing the freedom for the Indian people, while India was being captured by British that time, so we can’t imagine that without such figure the India would have got the freedom back.
Admittedly, the rulers, artist or scientist are the one to make change or their achievement are those to judge to the country as eminent. In the context of the recent world, we can see that those country who can have brought the great result in science or technology can boost up their country towards technology. Likewise USA, is now the most disseminated country world in the respect of the technology, and it is due to the people making the great change on it, or the scientist who have been involved in profound research to make out the result. Notwithstanding just the technology, USA is the world ruler, and this is possible due prominent leadership quality of the leader or their previous ruler who had been bold or been involved in finest way. Talking about art too USA is burgeoning, due to the presence of wide variety of artist, their effort, hardworking. Hence, these factor of arts, ruler and scientist are to be taken as the indicator for deeding the great nation.
Finally, the country which has the finest ruler artist and scientist or expert on various field, those country don’t have to face foolhardy situation. Moreover, the welfare of the country people will be itself flourishing without any doubt. The country will have the lucrative laws and policies because there are ruler to make great laws, people will be indulged in all the facilities because the nation has the prominent scientist and the county will also be ahead in arts or the people will have platform in the artistic aspect and so forth. In addition to, it implies that the country will serve their citizen effectively.
To sum up, the indicator for the great nation is conspicuously the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists since there the protagonist for the reform in the country or to provide the citizen welfare.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 357, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'represented'.
Suggestion: represented
...e surest indicator of a great nation is represent not by the achievements of its rulers, ...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...st up their country towards technology. Likewise USA, is now the most disseminated count...
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Line 5, column 738, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the finest'.
Suggestion: in the finest
...uler who had been bold or been involved in finest way. Talking about art too USA is burge...
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Line 7, column 319, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'rulers'?
Suggestion: rulers
...ive laws and policies because there are ruler to make great laws, people will be indu...
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Line 7, column 504, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'platformed'.
Suggestion: platformed
...e ahead in arts or the people will have platform in the artistic aspect and so forth. In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, such as, talking about, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2770.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 562.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92882562278 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86893614481 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70626472196 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425266903915 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 873.0 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.3293546526 60.3974514979 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.888888889 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2222222222 23.4991977007 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 5.21951772744 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161738977281 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538140715834 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742176900549 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116634112155 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100192345565 0.0667264976115 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.8971910112 256% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.