Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The past few decades have seen a sudden growth in technology. I do not fully agree with the statement that the technology has made our lives more complicated rather than simplyfying it. I take this stand due to the following reasons.
First, advancements in technology has led to better standards of living for the entire mankind. For example, today everyone has access to clean drinking water in their kitchen due to rapid growth of UV and RO technology. Air, rail, road communications are better than ever before and tech gadgets like mobile phones, laptops, etc. are faster and smoother compared to the old days. This has helped people to connect with each other and made their lives easier tremendously. All this technology advancement has led to higher level of satisfaction and happiness in an individual's life.
Second, automation of tasks has been made easier by the growing technology in most of the sectors of the world. For example, currently many of the factories and industries in the world have automated many of their tasks and thus, these tasks can be completed without any human indulgence now. This has led to better efficiency and productivity of these industries. In software industry, better neural networks have been modelled which have capability to learn taks and patterns that were thought to be impossible by machines in the past. Thus, advancements and growth of technology has resulted in automation of so many fields and thus have increased eficiency and made our lives easier.
Although the technology has some merits, but at the same time, technology has made our lives more isolated and dependent. People are nowadays more interested and cautious about their image online and are immensely lost in their gadgets so much that they have lost touch with the real world. The dependence of people on technology have also increased to the levels that most people cannot compute basic sums without using calculators on their phones. Gaming consoles like Xbox and Playstation which were meant to be stressbusters for students and adults, have successfully destroyed lives of millions of people who spent most of their time on these consoles rather than doing something productive. Thus, technology may have made our lives easier and better to a large extent but we cannot ignore some of the negative effects of it.
Thus, this is an intricate and complex issue. But we can conclude that although there are some negative aspects of technology which have made our life more complicated, but largely, the number of benefits outperform the negative effects and hence helps to make our lives better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, second, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2207.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1087962963 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67003930083 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50462962963 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.734527318 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.095238095 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186099836824 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058905959491 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668582912012 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125561373016 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045612427346 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.