Technology has made great advancements over the decades and continues to improve every single day. The prompt suggests that technology only makes our lives more complicated. I mostly disagree with the claim and will elaborate on the necessary points to defend my position.
Firstly, technology has simplified our lives in many ways. An example of this is kitchen appliances, such as a refridgerator. In the past century, people didn't have refridgerators and had to preserve their food with preservatives such as salt. They had to dry their meats in order to prevent it from spoiling or make sure that all of it was eaten before becoming expired. Technology has made it easy to prevent food from rotting.
Secondly, aside from simplifying the way we preserve our perishables, technology has simplified the way we communicate with others. Before telephones were invented, people would have to rely on postal service to conversate with others who may live far away. If people thought that the invention of the telephone made communication simple, it been simplified even further with the invention of cell phones. Smart phones in today's age make communication easier than it has ever been before. We could speak face to face with someone across the globe using video calls with today's technology.
Although, in contrast to my stance, technology has made our lives more complicated in some ways. Social media has simplified our lives in many ways, yet it has brought about new problems that can make life more complicated. Having an online presence can lead to issues such as cyberbullying and online stalking. However, if precautions are taken to make social media accounts private and to keep your location hidden, it can be a simple and safe way to stay connected with friends and family. Thus, social media can be a productive tool to make staying updated with friends that we don't speak to often simpler than ever before.
In conclusion, although social media can make life more complicated in some ways, if necessary safety precautions are taken it can serve as a tool to keep in touch with those who are important. I believe that social media has succeeded in its attempt to simplify our lives with the reasons that I have explained.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: didn't
...ridgerator. In the past century, people didnt have refridgerators and had to preserve...
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Suggestion: don't
...ke staying updated with friends that we dont speak to often simpler than ever before...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01336898396 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74820139071 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524064171123 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8556480906 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.75 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307131192569 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112198793206 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145139914112 0.0758088955206 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188751076936 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494615856301 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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