To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
This topic raises the controversial issue of whether one must study major cities in order to understand the most important characteristics of a society or not. While each side have its strength and weakness , I believe that to understand most important characteristics of the society one must study small villages than studying major cities. Indisputably, one could say that many characteristics of a society can be studied only in major cities such as time management and civic sense toward cleanliness especially in countries like India where cleanliness is major issue. Nevertheless, one could clearly agree that time management was also the part of farmer who was intelligent timed the cultivation of crop according to the environment and whether conditions .Thus, I generally disagree with the opinion that to understand the most important characteristics of society one must study its major cities, and would argue that the most characteristics of a society need to studied at the root that is villages from where it is evolved slowly and gradually since ages.
First of all, we should consider that many important characteristics were passed forward by many generation till it today reached the modern society.To illustrate, let us look at the example simple welcoming gesture of guest in Indian society. Indian society has a special respect for guest who come to
our houses. We greet them with love and respect .It is said in India that "Atithi devi Bhava "which means the guest who come to our house is equivalent to god.This is one of the important characteristics of Indian society and this is passed on by generation to generation from our ancestor staying in villages and gradually carried forward in the modern society in many major cities today in India.
Furthermore, If we see that major cities consist of people from many different part of area in a country and many of the people had migrated from small villages to this major cities .so many characteristics of the society has been developed from different belief and tradition of this people which came from different places. If we take a example of major cities in India which is Mumbai , so one can say that if we study a city like Mumbai then we could understand most important characteristics. But if u look closely in this context, people in Mumbai came from different small village and still continue to migrate. So many characteristic of society in Mumbai has been emerged from different culture and people which came there and stayed there for ages.
In Conclusion , Although some characteristic could be easily understood by studying major cities but many important characteristic can only be studied from where it is originated .So I strongly disagree that ,to study the most important characteristic of society ,one must study the major cities ,but one need to study the smallest village also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, so, still, then, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2418.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 474.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10126582278 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98636856655 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415611814346 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 771.3 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.511035686 60.3974514979 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 201.5 118.986275619 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.5 23.4991977007 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 5.21951772744 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446989669423 0.243740707755 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20043718288 0.0831039109588 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176340021441 0.0758088955206 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253905632279 0.150359130593 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.182894654283 0.0667264976115 274% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 14.1392134831 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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