To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
A society is made up of different people,aspects and functions. A society also has many characteristics which makes it important, such importance is needed to be understood and one such way I believe is by studying and understanding its major cities.Therefore in my opinion, I strongly agree that the major cities of a society need to be studied in order to understand it's most important characteristics. The following two reasons explains my position.
First, in order to understand a people and their cultural heritage, history is a most important tool to make use of. All societies have their history, be it recorded or not. One important way of knowing about a society's us through the history of their cities. For instance, a country like nigeria is made up of different and diverse people and cultures, with unique characteristics dwelling in particular cities. kano, a city in Nigeria help us understand the roots of people in kano, and their values.Therefore, studying the city of kano especially using its history gives us more proof of kano's important characteristics.For example the people of kano as history shows have been business people, and a lot of mosques show there are majorly Muslims. The city's gates e.g Kofar naisa shows thier defensiveness against intruders. The above examples ,through the help of the history of kano state city (or the study of kano city) opens the necessity of studying a city in order to understand its most important characteristics.
Secondly, a person new to a society (a country) has to study a city to be able to live and abide by their rules and regulation. as each society have their most important characteristics ranging from the type of clothing, food, sports and so on, studying a city will to a great extent help a new person become familiar with their ways. For instance, in Saudi Arabia, women and women are not allowed to mingle, hold hands or kiss if they are not yet married.Also women are not allowed to drive in the city. it is therefore by studying such city that one knows this characteristics that they consider not only valuable but sacred. therefore, only by studying the cities does one know of such values to that society.
Of course, Some may argue that studying cities isn't the only way to understand the characteristics of a sociey, but isn't a city the backbone of a society? Isn't the city of paris and its Eiffel tower what makes it unique and important to paris? Isn't a city and its history not what makes us know of its past, its struggles and values? ,therefore the studying of a city is necessity in order that we fully understand its most important characteristics.
In conclusion, in order that we understand a society's most important characteristics, we must study the history of its cities, also we must also look at a city's present rules and regulations, thier morals and sacrd values. For these reasons,one must study a society's major cities to understand thier most important characteristics.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2633.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 517.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09284332689 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.95764911346 2.79657885939 142% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.419729206963 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 841.5 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.9220889638 60.3974514979 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.681818182 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13636363636 5.21951772744 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40152394257 0.243740707755 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125291615566 0.0831039109588 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104576702845 0.0758088955206 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256860858137 0.150359130593 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639284754236 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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