To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Human psychology is a mixture of varied perspectives,intriguing nature and complex thoughts and are so diversified,similarly is the society.It also follows the same hierarchy with multi-hued cultures,traditions,diversities,perspectives and various styles.Major characteristics of a society are based on major cities is what the author claims.I agree with the claim at the same time dont completely agree the claim for the following reasons presented below.
Society is nothing but the group of people living together with varied cultures,traditions,various interests and a vast variety of languages which are diversified,yet unified.Cities are the geo-political capitals of economy,administration,industries etc.They do form the backbone of the country's economy and the at same time represent the various cosmopolitan life,which is rich in various cultures.
At the same time the reason why we cannot rely on the claim is that suppose ,for example:in the countries like india nearly 70% of people live in the rural villages and towns,where economy ans globalization is not so great.In these cases there is no point in studying the characteristics vof the city as most of the people live in the rural areas.As these rural areas gives us the essence of the most of the history and culture
and tradition ,we will fail to view the characteristics of the society as a whole.
And also the developed country which fails to note the holistic development,be it the cities or the rural areas,villages is still considered as the incomplete and the developing nation.The major cities are also thriving in order to get the complete sense of society through the transforamation of various cultures and traditions through generations which are followed by the rural areas.However, it is important to consider the rural areas as they are part of our country and they are the ones which shows the heritage and tradition of a particular society.
Therefore in order to study the overall characteristics of a society,it is not only important to study the cities but at the same time important to take rural areas,villages into consideration as we all know that history and traditions comes from them.And for a society to thrive it aslo equally important to consider rural areas and villages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, still, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 357.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44257703081 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.32830125059 2.79657885939 155% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490196078431 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 23.0359550562 308% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0023376269 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 388.6 118.986275619 327% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.4 23.4991977007 304% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.6 5.21951772744 261% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173362032996 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982505806404 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688557046704 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892099555068 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647890107438 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.9 14.1392134831 282% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.05 48.8420337079 -19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 12.1743820225 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.46 12.1639044944 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.14 8.38706741573 133% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 11.8971910112 269% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 11.2143820225 271% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 11.7820224719 272% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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