Understanding the past is of little use to those in current positions of leadership.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statements raises the question of whether the past is of relevance to those in current leadership positions. Although, we can agree that the economic and political views change over time, it is important for current leaders to analyze the past to make informed decisions. Thus, I disagree with the statement that "Understanding the past is of little use to current leaders" and would like to argue that analyzing the past can give current leaders meaningful insights.
Firstly, understanding past economic trends can help current leaders implement laws and schemes that have proven to benifit the people. This can be supported by talking about the new GST scheme introduced by the current leader of India, Mr. Modi, which has been immensely successful. This success can be attributed to the New Tax program introduced by the economic minister 10 years back. Mr. Modi understood that taxing the producer of goods did not work and so decided to tax the consumer instead through his GST scheme. Hence, understanding the mistakes of past leaders helped him make better laws.
Furthermore, a study by XYZ university, India, showed us that leaders with a background in history(study of the past) proved to perform better than others.
At the same time, we need to acknowledge that the views of the general public and economic standards change over time. This tells us that not all past experiences would be relevant or of use to the present and could sometimes even mislead the leaders to make wrong decisions.
Thus, a good understanding of the past proves to be benificial to those in current leadership positions and will help them perform their duties better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'raise'.
Suggestion: raise
The statements raises the question of whether the past is of ...
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Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
The statements raises the question of whether the past is of relevance to those in cu...
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Line 6, column 64, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ed to acknowledge that the views of the general public and economic standards change over time...
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Line 6, column 147, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...e over time. This tells us that not all past experiences would be relevant or of use to the pres...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 275.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10909090909 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8521564989 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549090909091 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 704.065955056 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2645521673 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.083333333 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175118506544 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694379700659 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599988499929 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995435779258 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699709868412 0.0667264976115 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.