The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
For me, the definition of the well-being of a society is everyone can live happily, comfortably, and free. Thus, in my opinion, I consider that the statement, the well-being of a society is hanced when many of its people question authority, only establishes when the authority is corrupted or terrible, even disregarding public opinion.
If all the citizens can realize and apprehend that their government is doing the wrong things or making erroneous decisions, they can hold a parade to present their sounds. In this way, the government or the authority will not haphazardly conduct policies that are only beneficial to them. Society becomes more friendly and harmonious for people. For example, there are many parades or protests in Taiwan which are devoted to expressing their own opinions. They question many about the government so that they help us turning into a well-being society.
Moreover, many people call for authority to help the underprivileged minority. When the government decides to sacrifice these underprivileged minorities if none of us question or support the minority publicly, the government will make the unfair conduction that overlooks those minority rights and interests. It hurts society. Therefore, the well-being of society needs everyone to question authority.
However, not always questioning authority is a worthy laudable way. If many of the people keep questioning every behavior of the authority, they can not do the policy or pass some legislation. It hinders the construction direction of the authority. Moreover, it will cause disputation between society. Everyone fights for the view that they support. It makes society more orderless.
In my opinion, the well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question the false action of authority
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to turn' or 'turn'.
Suggestion: to turn; turn
...out the government so that they help us turning into a well-being society. Moreover, m...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 282.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3865248227 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00874979405 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510638297872 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.939836452 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3888888889 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237718956915 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769748305659 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742056066857 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165560840504 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760233795894 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to turn' or 'turn'.
Suggestion: to turn; turn
...out the government so that they help us turning into a well-being society. Moreover, m...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 282.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3865248227 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00874979405 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510638297872 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.939836452 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3888888889 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237718956915 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769748305659 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742056066857 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165560840504 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760233795894 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.