"While some leaders in government, sports, industry, and other areas attribute their success to a well-developed sense of competition, a society can better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of cooperation."
Human beings are compassionate. We love to stand by for each other and help each other. Without help of each other it would have been impossible for human race to come to at this very point of civilization. The author has raised an issue which is vouching for instilling co operation within the young generation and negating competition from them to create the future leader in government and industries. Indisputably, cooperation is a vital key to creat the leaders. In our community we can minimize all the negatives through cooperation.
First of all, at the tender age everyone try to learn from their surroundings. They do what they see in their everyday life. For example, if a young kid grow up in a family where the parents quarrel often, they tend to be violent in their later part of life. On the other hand if they see a cooperative family, there is a high chance that they grow with a strong mentality. I am pointing this family matter in this discussion to point out the very first stage from where we will know what cooperation is. And this point is single handedly most important to push cooperation and bring good in the society.
Secondly, in the educational institutions and places that are same like this helping each other plays a vital role. Students tend to become more kind yet grow strong personality through this act. Some might disagree with me at this point that is we need competition in the schools to bring about good results. Yes I think a 'healthy competition' can make a good result. However, competition brings about other side effects like bullying which is detrimental for a young fellow at this age. His potential to be the next leader might be nipped in the bud. In this context cooperation will pave the way for him to nurture his potential in ver best way.
Thirdly, in the industries and goverment offices, we can nurture leadership through helping each other. For example, new employees are often criticized for their naive decisions. Instead of doing that the seniors can help them doing that job, be more gentle and supporting to the young employees can change the whole plot. It is a matter of regret that the leaders don't care for making the next leader, they only think about themselves. But they should also think that his lifetime and position is not perpetual. He cannot hold that seat for an infinite amount of time. From the sake of his own industry or for the sake country they should raise the support for the next generation.
To sum up, I would like to say that a lot of people in the society think and in many cases practice some form of competition. It is not all bad to be competitive but it is a gateway to other noxiuos byproducts that hinder the young generation badly. So, I think a society with cooperation can build a better leadership tha
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- "While some leaders in government, sports, industry, and other areas attribute their success to a well-developed sense of competition, a society can better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of cooperation." 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to do' or 'do'.
Suggestion: to do; do
...of doing that the seniors can help them doing that job, be more gentle and supporting...
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Line 7, column 366, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... is a matter of regret that the leaders dont care for making the next leader, they o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, for example, i think, first of all, in many cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2322.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 497.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67203219316 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60845927151 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503018108652 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 713.7 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0867110021 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.0689655172 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1379310345 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34482758621 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165881037925 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448022358019 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351500944509 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104248731472 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426422331433 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 48.8420337079 146% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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