CAMBRIDGE 6 TEST 1
The line graph illustrated about water consumption in Brazil and Democratic of Congo in 1990-2000.
Based on graph, in 2000 Brazil had population amount 176 million and it had irrigarted land 26.500 km2 and for consumption perperson around 359 m3. Meanwhile, Democratic of Congo had 5.2 million population and they used for irrigating amount 100 km2 and for consumption 8 m3.
As global the consumption of water has three parts namely agriculture, industrial, and domestic consumption. In 1990 the biggest consumption of water is farming approximately 2.500 km3 and in 2000 it increased significantly 30%. Second place was Industrial consumption, in 1999 the consumption of water amount 1.800 km3 and went up 40% in 2000. The third was domestic consumption, in 1990 the consumption 500 km3 and it rose 20% in 2000.
Overall the graph showed linier correlation between consumption of water and population in Brazil and Republic of Congo.
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Sentence: As global the consumption of water has three parts namely agriculture, industrial, and domestic consumption.
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they used for irrigating amount 100 km2 and for consumption 8 m3.
Description: 'they' refers to what?
Sentence: Based on graph, in 2000 Brazil had population amount 176 million and it had irrigarted land 26.500 km2 and for consumption perperson around 359 m3.
Error: irrigarted Suggestion: irrigated
Error: perperson Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Overall the graph showed linier correlation between consumption of water and population in Brazil and Republic of Congo.
Error: linier Suggestion: ?
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