cambridge 5 task II
The universities is place which provide development knowladges and skills. Every year, many students of senior high schools have to compete to be able enter in the universities. Some people believe that the universities should receive balance amount of male or female pupils in every faculties. There are many arguments about that issues.
The collage should choose the students selectively base on academic grades and skills either boys or girls without consider subject what the student pick out. Every pupils have different passions and abilities. For example many schools prefer major civil enginering than art design and many schoolboys in major cookery. In that case sometimes in each faculties, the number of female students are larger than male students
The cause could not force the learners to choose the subject what they consider. Obiviously, the most of universities have purpose to produce graduates with a good knowladges and abilities according to the workplace. Furthermore the collage force to accept balance students base on gender is mistaken because choosing of subject according to passion qnd skills each person.
from the issues mentioned above, i personally believe that the universities should not accept students base on gender but should base on academic grades and skills
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The universities is place which provide development knowladges and skills.
The universities are the places which provide development on knowledge and skills.
have to compete to be able enter in the universities.
have to compete to be able to enter in the universities.
in every faculties
in every faculty
The collage should choose the students selectively base on academic grades and skills either boys or girls without consider subject what the student pick out.
The college should choose the students selectively based on academic grades and skills either boys or girls without considering subject that the student picked out.
Every pupils have different passions and abilities
Every pupil has different passions and abilities
Furthermore the collage force to accept balance students base on gender is mistaken
Furthermore the college which forces to accept balance students based on gender is mistaken
should not accept students base on gender but should base on academic grades and skills
should not accept students based on gender but should based on academic grades and skills
Sentence: The universities is place which provide development knowladges and skills.
Error: knowladges Suggestion: knowledge
Sentence: For example many schools prefer major civil enginering than art design and many schoolboys in major cookery.
Error: enginering Suggestion: engineering
Sentence: Obiviously, the most of universities have purpose to produce graduates with a good knowladges and abilities according to the workplace.
Error: knowladges Suggestion: knowledge
Sentence: Furthermore the collage force to accept balance students base on gender is mistaken because choosing of subject according to passion qnd skills each person.
Error: collage Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
Read a good grammar book.
No. of Words: 203 350
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 3.5 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 203 350
No. of Characters: 1082 1500
No. of Different Words: 113 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.775 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.33 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.568 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 62 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.917 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.211 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.37 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.581 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.058 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5