The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table illustrates the different approach toward travelling vehicle by giving information about the average distance in year 1985 versus 2000 in England. The information of the table is categorized into eight means of travelling.

In year 1985, the same as the year 2000 the most appropriate vehicle for commuting is car. While English people in year 1985 did not like to travel much by taxi and in year 2000 they prefer not to travel by taxi or bicycle.

There are some dramatic and slight changes has happened during this 15-year period. The total amount of distance has about 2000 miles increase. The same as the amount of all modes traveling, the dramatic increase has been observed for means such as car, long distance bus, train, taxi and other vehicles. In contrast, there are slight declines for walking, bicycle and the huge decrease and fall for the usage of local bus.

To sum up, the table shows a total increase of average distance n miles traveled per each person and per each year of 1985 and 2000. In this table just some modes of travelling such as walking, bicycle and local bus have slight drop. The decreased usage of healthy vehicles is disappointing point.

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There are some dramatic and slight changes has happened during this 15-year period.
There are some dramatic and slight changes which have happened during this 15-year period.

have slight drop.
have slight drops.
have a slight drop.

The decreased usage of healthy vehicles is disappointing point.
The decreased usage of healthy vehicles is a disappointing point.

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