The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of several tourist facilities.
Summarizing the informations by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relavent.
The two figures illustrate the physical changes of a small island after people built some facilities related to tourism.
The east portion of the island remains intact while numerous houses and roads were constructed in the west and middle part of the island. The houses include a reception in the center of the island and a restaurant slightly north to it. The reception was surrounded by several accommodations and some routes are built to link these houses together. However, the accommodations east to the receptions are not linked to the reception or the restaurant. These accommodations are separated from other houses on the island and they have their own routes which connected them together.
On the southern part of the island, a pier was constructed from the shore and extended toward the sea. Two boats were presented nearby the pier.
A small route is built to connect the accommodations to the beach in the west shore of the island. Tourists can access the beach via this new route and go swimming.
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the accommodations east to the receptions are not linked to the reception or the restaurant.
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