Write a report to the university lecturer describing the information below
The given bar graph compares the information about drinking habits of British adults in terms of men and women in 2004 and the line graph shows the average alcohol consumption by the age group 11-15 in England from 1990-2004.
While analyzing the bar graph, there were substantial differences in the proportion of drinking pattern of men & women in all the age groups. 48% of men in the age group of 16-24 were used to drink more than the recommended guidelines, which is in fact the joint highest proportion with 25-44 age group in the g...
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No. of Words: 277 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 277 200
No. of Characters: 1272 1000
No. of Different Words: 136 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.08 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.592 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.536 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 75 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.182 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.143 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.545 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.392 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.619 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.147 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4