amount spent on consumer goods

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amount spent on consumer goods

The chart given illustrates the differences in the budget that people in 4 countries which are Germany, Italy, France and Britain spent on buying products. Six products are personal stereos, tennis racquets, perfumes, CDs, Toys and photographic film respectively. In general, the largest amount of money was spent by British and among six products, photographic film was consumed the most.
It is observed that British shoppers spent a little more than 170 thousand pounds to own photographic film. While toys and CDs were the second and third sought-after products of British which were higher than 10 thousand pound, British spent only similarly 1 thousand pound for personal stereos and tennis racquets. Germany tent to spent the same amount of money on buying each product which was a little more than 14 thousand pounds. Both French and Italian spent nearly 10 thousand pounds on buying toys.
To sum up, citizen in Britain were the biggest spenders in all six categories among the nations compared in the bar chart while the lowest spending levels were attributed to the residents of Germany.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sand pound, British spent only similarly 1 thousand pound for personal stereos an...
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Line 2, column 326, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Germany) must be used with a third-person verb: 'tents'.
Suggestion: tents
...al stereos and tennis racquets. Germany tent to spent the same amount of money on bu...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e lowest spending levels were attributed to the residents of Germany.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, similarly, so, third, while, in general, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16201117318 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58059441935 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581005586592 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7100030754 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17194885429 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083648959792 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749293582004 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102234247869 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751728418381 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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