Violence in the media promotes violence in society. Do you agree or disagree?
The world that we live in today is dominated by media such as television, the internet and newspaper. I partially agree with the statement that if media show violent news then that increase more violence in the public. In my opinion there are two sides of the coin, one is negative and other is positive.
To begin with the positive aspect of violence in media. With the broadcast of violent incidents by media, it creates more awareness and caution among public. Take for example news about domestic violence and serial killing. By watching such news people become more careful and get knowledge about related laws or the required actions that they can take in similar situation. Therefore, probability of crimes is decreasing and safety measures are increasing.
However, if we look at the downside of showing physical force or threatened, there are detrimental effects on underage people. As a result, such shows put enormous emotional and mental pressure on children like depression and anti-social behavior. Although there is a censor board to control harmful information, but there are very few ethical and moral principles left among media. In addition, violent shows can give ideas to criminals to do other crimes by shoeing previous criminals’ crime strategies and the mistakes which led them to get caught.
After analyzing all the above factors, I would like to conclude that media has enormous impact on our everyday lives. Violence in media has its own merits and demerits as every good thing has advantages and disadvantages. So to gain the advantages, we have to tackle the disadvantages.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14068441065 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74563156257 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627376425856 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4533870284 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188979412621 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625313743908 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772133687666 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112494137524 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454666422122 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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