Violence In Media Promotes Violence In Society. To what extent do you agree?
It is often argued that violent programmes on television and the internet influence people to commit crime and incite violence. I completely agree with this opinion. In this essay, I will be analysing the negative impacts of media on the society before arriving at a conclusion.
Firstly, people tend to believe that brutality shown in movies is heroic and they imitate them blindly. Film stars perform stunts and crimes in their movies, making the audience believe that such activities are essential to become a super human. Viewers are influenced when they watch actors perform violent activities on screen. For example, there are many reports of people committing crimes as a result of watching crime thriller films. These audience turned criminals plot their brutal acts by imitating what they saw in such movies.
Secondly certain kind of media allows people to form groups, which can be misused as a platform to spread hatred among people. Social media such as Facebook and Whatsapp have features that allow users to communicate and spread violence without any censorship. Issues like religious intolerance and racial discrimination often hurt individual sentiments. Consequently, people become selfish and they start hating each other. For example, nowadays, terrorists use social media to brainwash people to perform violent activities such as bombing and explosions.
In conclusion, different forms of media like movies and social media promote brutality as people get inspired and brainwashed by its contents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this audience' or 'These audiences'?
Suggestion: This audience; These audiences
...esult of watching crime thriller films. These audience turned criminals plot their brutal acts...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47881355932 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67582984414 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639830508475 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8483897616 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.3571428571 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120608416877 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037314775719 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045109694333 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767675708234 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374790908891 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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