Average carbon dioxide emissions per person, 1967-2007.
The given charts depict data bout average emissions of carbon dioxide per person in such countries as United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal during the period from 1967 to 2007.
It can be seen that the Sweden line almost converged with United Kingdom and crossed with Portugal line. Emission in UK was the highest during the whole period. By contrast, Portugal emission had the lowest points until the crossed.
Looking at the details, it must be said that emissions in United Kingdom had a slight downward trend during the period. It started with roughly 11 tonnes in 1967 and finished in 2007 with nearly 9 tonnes of carbon dioxide. Until 1977 the Sweden line rose from approximately 9 to slightly more than 10 tonnes. After that it was dropping steadily to almost 6 tonnes in 2007. It is clear to see that such emissions as in Italy and in Portugal were climbing gradually. The former started at around 4 tonnes and the latter at about 1. It is worth noting that in 1997 both of them were still rising but marginally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Until” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...with nearly 9 tonnes of carbon dioxide. Until 1977 the Sweden line rose from approxim...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tely 9 to slightly more than 10 tonnes. After that it was dropping steadily to almost...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67955801105 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30871808077 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585635359116 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.810849645 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264084103779 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085115802857 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126891702916 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216162945666 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175054473924 0.0819641961636 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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