the average of Vietnamese students in three countries

Essay topics:

the average of Vietnamese students in three countries

The graph illustrates information about how many Vietnamese students studying in three countries over the period of 15 years.

Overall, while the average number of Vietnamese students enrolling in American and French shools went up, the opposite was true for Russian schools. Also, the figure for Vietnamese students studying in America experienced the most significant growth during the time.
In 2000, the number of Vietnamese studens in France was highest with about 3.5 millions, in comparison with roughly 3 millions and only 1.5 millions in Russia and America respectively. In the next 5 years, the figure for that in Russia and France saw a considerable decrease of 1 millions. By contrast, the number of Vietnamese students in the USA rose to approximately 2 millions.

From 2005 onwards, the figure for Vietnamese students in America increased sharply to 5 millions in 2015, while the number of that in France remained stable before rising to around 4.5 millions in the last year. Meanwhile, the year 2010 witnessed a decline to a low just under 2 millions of Vietnamese students in Russia, but then the figure recovered back to 2.5 millions at the end of the time.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 278, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '2 million'.
Suggestion: 2 million
...witnessed a decline to a low just under 2 millions of Vietnamese students in Russia, but then...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09278350515 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82630327851 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546391752577 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5986452976 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315405901912 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140275564985 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093116158508 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198815075806 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868080501716 0.0819641961636 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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