The bar chart below shows employment figures in different tourism-related industries between 2009 and 2019.
The bar graph provides information about employment rates in various tourism-related industries over ten years. The data is in thousands.
Overall, it is seen clearly from the given bar chart that the hotel industry was the highest, then which replaced by food industries in a given period. Meanwhile, all industries showed significant increment, except for the culture industry.
In 2009, hotels and other accommodations were the highest in the employment figures with 299.2 thousand employees. The next highest was the sports industry there were nearly 284 thousand. It was only 1 thousand bigger than the food industry, while they travel and culture industry both employment rates at 60.9 and 82.8 thousand respectively in this list.
By contrast, by 2019, all businesses showed increments in their employment figure, except for only the culture sector, which declined around 5 thousand. The food industry provided the highest number of employment, over 350 thousand. Following this, sports industries rose over 345 thousand, While the hotel industry rose drastically to 306 thousand. Moreover, the travel industry showed a double number in their employment rate as compared with their past, Which was at 114.2 thousand by 2019.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...and employees. The next highest was the sports industry there were nearly 284 thousand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, then, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49738219895 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80886026818 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575916230366 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3892220301 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4545454545 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251136740885 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978495753982 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596597677314 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162496818027 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336833549237 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.