The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The given bar chart compares the rate of males and females in Australia who do exercises on a regular basis considering six different age groups in the year 2010.
Overall, it can be seen that generally, Australian women tend to participate in working out more than their counterparts except for the youngest age group and as people are getting older, they are likely to do exercise more often in this country.
The most remarkable feature in this chart is that the aged between 35 to 64, women doing regular physical activity accounted for at least 52.2% while, males ranged from nearly 40% to 45.1%. In particular, people who are 45 to 54 had the most significant figures at 53%, on the other hand, the age group between 35 to 40 in males was the lowest at 39.5%.
In the meantime, the age bracket from 15 to 24 showed the adverse trend compared with the data as mentioned above. Men who took part in regular exercise accounted for just over a half, in contrast, women in this group had only 47.7&. Regarding the age of 65 and above had the similar figures between females and males who were involved in exercise regularly with 47.1% and 46.7% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, while, at least, except for, in contrast, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68446601942 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46991989522 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.4132976771 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.857142857 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4285714286 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7142857143 5.23603664747 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306938444246 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136110741155 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697610275137 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178465275066 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668402422882 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.