The bar chart below shows the percentage of people living alone in 5 different age groups in the USA between 1890 and 2000.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of USA commuters who lived alone in various age over a period 150 years, from 1890 to 2000.
Overall, it is clear that the number of people living alone increased through out the time shown. Also, people who aged at 55-64 had a large majority of living alone.
In the year 1850, people had age group at 37-46,47-54 and 55-64 accounted for nearly 3%. In 1990, those living alone who aged at 27-36 appeared with over than 2%. And other age groups at that time just were sightly higher than that of 27-36.
In 1950, the following 50 years, a little proportion of people who lived alone at 17-26 appeared and continuously increased until the amount had more double and reached at 8%. The other age groups live alone gradual developed significantly. Especially people at 55-64, in 1950, the amount just stood at nearly 10%. But in 2000, it went up to 17% and accounted for the largest proportion.
- People tend to work longer hours nowadays Working long hours has a negative effect on themselves their families and the society so working hours should be restricted Do you agree or disagree 33
- With more and more people communicating via computers and smart phones. There is a real danger that we are losing the ability to communicate with others face to face. Do you agree or disagree. 56
- The charts below show the percentage of water used by different sectors in Sydney, Australia, in 1997 and 2007. 56
- The chart below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projection for 2050. 67
- In the developed countries, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society ?Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67272727273 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38706338947 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569696969697 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7266956579 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289337722591 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129633872146 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825350147275 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205237479536 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696928754157 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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