The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2011 and 2021.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram demonstrates the prevalence of renowned Instagram accounts between 2011 and 2021.
Overview, the figure for all influencers rose significantly in the period of 3 years. Additionally, Selena Gomez was the most-followed person among 5 celebrities, which then decreased to the least and was taken place by Cristiano Ronaldo.
In 2018, Selena Gomez had the greatest number of followers with the figure being recorded at about 130 million, followed by Cristiano Ronaldo and Ariana Grande with a similar figure (120) which was lower than Selena Gomez’s followers by approximately 10 million. The Rock and Kylie Jenner had the least number of followers on social media application (Instagram) with the respective figures being at about 90 million and 100 million.
In the next 3 years, Cristiano Ronaldo’s followers soared sharply to roughly 310 million and became the most influential celebrity. Similarly, The Rock, Ariana Grande and Kylie Jenifer witnessed an approximate double increase in number of followers to the same figure in 2011 (250 million). Notably, the influence Selena Gomez also grew to roughly 249 million; however, its figure was the least compared to its counterparts.
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- The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990 1995 2000 and 2005 million Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, similarly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4385026738 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89450574645 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593582887701 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3661592739 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.125 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0372199939909 0.215688989381 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267709567554 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529074948268 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0472399065772 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675481065592 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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