The bar chart below shows the results of a survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The bar chart indicates a survey on the elements that influence worker’s performance, with the figures for two groups of workers: 18-30 age and 45-60 age group.
Overall, is it clear that some aspects share the same result in both two age groups. In term of salary, both show nearly the same proportion at 75%. Similar results have been witnessed in team spirit at 70%, and in work environment at only 30%, while some other factors such as chance for personal development, relaxed working environment and promotion prospects witnesses significant differences.
Regarding the group aged between 18 and 30, self-promotion opportunities, comfortable working environment and promotion prospects are the most vital considerations. The work performance of younger worker depends mostly on personal development opportunities, at more than 80%, which is as twice as that of older group. Similarly, relaxed working environment factor account for nearly 75% of the result of people in 18-30, compared to only 35% for that of the elderly. Other considerable gaps have been observed in the promotion prospect and job security affecting more young workers.
Furthermore, while the second age group has a tendency to focus the most on salary, job security has the smallest effect on their performances, with the approximately 50% gap.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, second, similarly, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39423076923 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0564220874 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605769230769 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1620519092 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287246849329 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115372917417 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829590449806 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181130269729 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960490048046 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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