The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.

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The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.

The bar chart below reveals proportion of the total spends on Food, Housing, Transportation, Health care and Clothing in four countries. Units are measured in percentages.

Overall, the sector of Housing was the highest among all countries except Japan, whereas, food occupied main expenditure. Health care and Clothing accounted for the lowest figure in compare to other four categories.

In housing area, only the US showed just more than 25%, while other three varied between 20% and 25%. In terms of Transportation, Canada spend a fifth on this as opposed to exactly 17.5%, 15% and 10% (the US, the UK and Japan respectively). The expenditure on Food in Japan (23%) was higher than the United Kingdom (20%), Canada (15%) and the United States (fewer than 15%).

In one of the lowest sectors, Health care, the percentage of the US was the most in contrast to the least figure of the UK. Additionally, Canada and Japan allocate the equal money to Health care with approximation of 5%. In the second lowest sphere, Clothing, all countries differed from 4 to 6 percent.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Canada) must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...25%. In terms of Transportation, Canada spend a fifth on this as opposed to exactly 1...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, whereas, while, in contrast, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75283804172 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605555555556 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5162667016 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188800602251 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710473571945 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691456457091 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103932239666 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621154491813 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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