The bar chart gives information about the volumes of electricity that were created and used in the top ten countries in 2014.
According to the chart, China presented the largest number among all of these countries, which produced and consumed 5398 billion kWh and 5332 billion kWh, respectively. The United States ranked the second most place with a 4099 billion kWh production and 3866 billion kWh consumption.
Russia, Japan and India followed by producing around 900 billion kWh. Canada, France and Brazil had a similar number of production and consumption, which stood at around 500 billion kWh. However, Korean produced and consumed the less amount of electricity among these ten countries, with 485 billion kWh and 449.5 billion kWh. By contrast, Germany was the only country which consumed more than produced. The figures are 526.6 billion kWh and 582.5 billion kWh respectively.
Overall, China consumed the highest amount of energy while Korea consumed the least. Although Germany consumed relatively low, it used more than created.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35151515152 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5522995987 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593939393939 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 109.426892938 43.030603864 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.142857143 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0900447518509 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564026054324 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874349127824 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089408295818 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102450455877 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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