The given bar chart demonstrates the information between ten countries to manufacture and using electric in 2014. The number is measuring by billions.
In general, we can see that the figure in the production and consumption of light was the highest level in China, instead of Korea Republic.
Getting back to the details of China the number manufacture and use of electric was close, as 5398 and 5322 billion kWh, while the digits of Korea Republic were the lowest rate 4851 and 4495 billion kWh. In the second place was the United States, which used electric 3866 billion kWh and manufactured it just 4099 billion kWh. The quantity of manufacturing electricity was 10570000 - 9360000 kWh respectively in Russia and Japan, whenever the figure for using light was shown 10380000 and 8570000 kWh respectively. It can be observed that the proportion of using and producing electricity was between 9000000 kWh and 4500000 kWh among the other five countries.
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